Incredible!

Thank you for posting your masterpiece on this site.
Although I was not accustomed to works that were read from the left, the composition and panel layout smoothly led my eyes.
The characters and drawings are excellent, but there are a few points that could have been much better…, I’d like to share with you some of that points below;

1. Scene allocation
Overall, I felt there were a lot of training and battle scenes. The battles you drew are soooooooo cool, which is your charm, but since we are still in the first episode, I would like to know more about the main character's past, background, personality, and what kind of organization he belongs to, etc.

I felt it wouldn't have been to put the training scene with Gardian after the training scene with Wouldja.
If that were the case, I thought that more pages on Baron's painful past(of his sis) would help readers become more attached to the main character.

2. Master
I could read that Baron has 2 master…Wouldja and Gardian
They are both attractive, but perhaps it would be better to start with one and have the other appear after the story has progressed.


…Anyway, your works did really good job.
and I have no idea how you caught up this stunning concept and how to draw this world...Hope you post next epi and never give up drawing manga.
Sincerely,