Hello and thank you for posting !
(Looking at your Twitter account, I assumed that I’ll be easier for you to read comments in English than in Japanese.)
Also I just saw that this manga was nominated for Silent Contest yesterday, so congratulations !

The story was easy to follow and the ending was very sweet and joyful.
On the graphic side, contrast is working well making the pages easy to read. Characters faces and poses are expressive and lively. There’s some minor proportion issues sometimes, but they can easily be fixed.

I look forward reading your next stories with text !